up

package_onelab.sh

@@ -2,11 +2,12 @@
 
 DATE=`date "+%d/%m/%Y"`
 
-echo "This ONELAB bundle was built on ${DATE} with the latest nightly snapshots
-of Gmsh (http://gmsh.info) and GetDP (http://getdp.info).
+echo "This ONELAB bundle was built on ${DATE} with the latest builds of Gmsh
+(http://gmsh.info) and GetDP (http://getdp.info).
 
-Launch Gmsh and open a GetDP .pro file (e.g. models/magnetometer/magnetometer.pro)
-with the File/Open menu, then click on \"Run\".
+To run your first simulation, launch Gmsh and open a GetDP .pro file
+(e.g. models/Magnetometer/magnetometer.pro) with the File/Open menu, then click
+on \"Run\". 
 
 The software is distributed under the terms of the GNU General Public License. 
 See the LICENSE and CREDITS files for more information. 
@@ -14,8 +15,8 @@ See the LICENSE and CREDITS files for more information.
 The 'tutorials' directory contains ONELAB tutorials. The 'models' directory contains
 a selection of other ready-to-use models from http://onelab.info.
 
-See http://onelab.info, http://gmsh.info and http://getdp.info for additional
-examples, up-to-date versions and documentation." > /tmp/README.txt
+See http://onelab.info for additional examples, up-to-date versions and
+documentation." > /tmp/README.txt
 
 GMSH=git
 GETDP=git